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you are my placebo


You are the men that help me live
The ones i would die for
every thought you give
i come back for more
every word you say i know is true
You are the men that i adore
i love you because you are you
i am your placebo whore
fake is a placebo
But i know my love is real
all the words you throw
they tell me how you feel


a Placebo


i may love you for your voice
the way that you sing
the way your guiatrs sway
and the way you hit the drum
the way you smile
and look up at the sky
the way you laugh
the way you stand
the way you walk
and clench your hands
i love you my darlings
and i fear you gone
i wish to breath your air
and shake your hands
you are my princes
and you slay away my pain
my tears stop falling
when i hear your voice again
your music is my placebo
that make the pain go away
a real placebo is what you are
and i listen for you everyday.


the meeting


 


 I dream one day to meet you
to hold your hands with care
to touch your skins
to hear your voices there
to laugh at your coments
and to talk to you
to smell your sweet sents
and watch what you do
to meet you is me dream
and dreams come true
but it seems that
i will never meet you


 


ALL BY MEEEE!! LOL!!


 


hope ya like um


 


 



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that's really cool hannah!

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they're great...

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Thank you :)

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I have some poems... in romanian.. they're really bad and there's no point in posting them cos you wouldn't understand them anyway.. next time I'll write I'll write in English and then I'll ost them

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Id like to see your romanian poems


 



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and you'd liek tehm translated>??
PLus they're really lame and I'm ashamed of them

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can i see them in romanian and in english :D


and im sure their good



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I'll post them next week, cos now I'm still ashamed of them... is that ok?

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...i've also got some poems...most of them are nonPlacebo related...so i think i'll have to search for the ones bout them, then i'll post them

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soa re mine.. but 'm working on the translation right now

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well, at first this poem was gonna be about Brian...but then it turned out that it can be for Steve or Stef too...(at least that's what i think...)              


Delicate figure


Perfect anatomy


I touch you tenderly


Showing a nervous smile


You hold me


And hug me


Don’t let go


I need you


A look to your beautiful eyes


Hear your soft voice


As the first time I did


I lost control


Your childish smile captured me


While the sweetest laugh captivated my heart
-- Edited by dub psychosis at 01:24, 2004-09-10



-- Edited by dub psychosis at 01:25, 2004-09-10

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omg!
it's so nice... I mean.. it's great...

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all poems are good, your talented. you have the thing that lyric writters and poem writters have. bet their really good

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wow that poem is amazing

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thanks, i'm glad u liked it, , later i'll post more

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Yeah..so will i

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'For All You Bleeding Hearts'


You, you are my breathe and my tears  


Full of wisdom beyond your years.


I feel your passion move me


Caress me.


You bring out the beauty that noone else sees.


- Jenna                     


 


I tend to write poems on the spur-of-the-moment. I did this just now, inspired by all of your poems.                                              



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"I see the world"


I see the world differently
And i know you do aswell
Sometimes i feel trapt
And noone can tell
You lighten up the day for me
And make me smile again
You make my different world happy
And you take away my pain


By mee


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go girl... your on a role!

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ok, so, i didn't wrote this poem, it's by Gustavo Adolfo Bécquer, but it reminds me of Brian : (sorry if the translation is poor...i'm translating it right now..)


Rime XIII


Your pupil is blue, and when you laugh
it's gentle clarity reminds me
of the quivering shine of the morning
that reflects in the sea.


Your pupil is blue, and when you cry,
the transparent tears in it
figure drops of dew
over a violet.


Your pupol is blue, and if in it's background
like a dot of light shines an idea,
looks like the evening sky
¡a lost star!




-- Edited by dub psychosis at 04:51, 2005-01-17

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What language is it translated from? I like it, though I'm still pondering the biological liklihood of a blue pupil. 

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